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Post by Phankam on May 1, 2006 19:24:33 GMT -5
AAAHHH ALLY! I loved it.... it almost made me cry though! Mike's dad is such an asshole! *grumbles* And i felt like punching Mikey's aunt in her stupid face! (somehow when i read this i imagine Mike's aunt as my P.E. teacher lmao)..... yay i can't wait til wednesday!
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Post by *Lore~Lowell* on May 1, 2006 19:27:07 GMT -5
lol! Your P.E. teacher? Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. ;D
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Post by carkey on May 1, 2006 19:29:50 GMT -5
Oh mah gah! That aunt is a bitch and a half, wtf. I absolutely love that you included Marth in this, if I was in a video game, I'd so hook up with him.  /random Okay, constructive...you really do have a way of getting to my gut at a single line, such as “Hey, how’d it ? Mike? Dude, what’s wrong, what happened?”Loved that. “You act tough,” she said, “like the world can’t harm you, but that’s only because all you’ve been doing, all your life, is running away from it.”This line was really actually incredibly moving. The only tiny thing I'd point out is that who the hell would make a list of classmates they wanted kicked out and give it to the principal? It could happen, perhaps, maybe I just don't want to think about it because that's completely stuck up and disgusting. But you rock. Like woah. |
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Post by *Lore~Lowell* on May 1, 2006 20:44:27 GMT -5
Thanks, Car! *is all warm inside* Yes, I HAD to include Marth, of course. My favorite will always be Roy, though. *shrug* And thank you for the nice loooooooooooooooooooooooooooong review! ;D It made my night. On the other note, yeah, I guess people could make a list of kids they wanted um...."checked" and give it to the principal, cuz I've actually heard about it done. Completely outta line, huh? Ugh. Love ya, Carleigh! Thanks again!  |
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Post by greenbananas on May 4, 2006 18:02:45 GMT -5
GAH!!!! I just read it and it's not fair that you left us there!!!! *cries* And I might not be able to read it on Saturday....*cries more* It was so.....incredible. I don't know how to say it. It was just incredible....now I want more!!! And Billie, yeah, he was very realistic.
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Post by *Lore~Lowell* on May 4, 2006 20:27:11 GMT -5
Wow, you're the only one who reviewed? *looks around* Well, thank you! ;D
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Post by St. Jimmy on May 4, 2006 20:30:11 GMT -5
I fell behind on the parts... fuck. *kicks self*
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Post by *Lore~Lowell* on May 4, 2006 20:35:11 GMT -5
Apparently!
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Post by Phankam on May 4, 2006 20:38:26 GMT -5
wha? you updated?! *is off to read*
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Post by greenbananas on May 4, 2006 20:39:50 GMT -5
I wanted to read it last night but I couldn't because my brother needed to research for his term paper *kicks brother*
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'Cause like...duh. 
